1. riding the horses.
2. hunting.
3. no catch.
The darkness
had spread and the bitter breeze swept through my hair. As me and my brother
sat silently on our horses. We watched
my uncle cutting a track so we could take the horses through it. Suddenly we
heard a loud roar. “It’s a stag” my uncle whispered to us.
We jumped off
our horses and walked the rest of the track. Creeping and taking careful steps.
Watching for twigs so we don’t snap them and give the stag a freight otherwise it
will run away.
It started
to get really late so we walked back to find our horses. We didn’t catch
anything but next time we will catch that stag.
What an exciting thing to do! Was it scarey being out in the bush?
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you described the wind at the start of your writing. Very effective!